Even This Maple

Even this maple
has only room
for two swallows…
when did I become
the other woman?

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janet said…
Good work, this and other poems here (and TS Awards)! And always nice to "see" a fresh face in the world of Japanese form, especially tanka, since I'm partial to tanka. ;)
November 12, 2007 at 1:49 PM
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