Frozen
frozen
our last night together
in the back seat of your car--
three weeks later
this rose remains unwilted
our last night together
in the back seat of your car--
three weeks later
this rose remains unwilted
blackbird song
blackbird song as far as the road goes between the hills
Comments
I like this tanka very much.
all my best,
Alan
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